Improvement
Much better than the first, but too short.
Improvement
Much better than the first, but too short.
Could've been alright...
This could've been good except for two things: you need sound, and the graphics werent't good, except for the planes. The areas the planes flew in weren't well done, and neither were the effects (like the shooting).
Weird
I didn't understand this, and your lip syncing was off.
Good, a little too short
That was good, but you should make each part a little longer, it's way too short.
Age 32, Male
USA
Joined on 2/20/07